Up the Tree

Montauk Haiku

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by

Funtime Ben
in

Spent Montauk Weekend
Returned to New York and war
Sunscreen please protect

Comments

3 responses to “Montauk Haiku”

  1. Naaman Avatar
    Naaman

    No fucking talent
    I have to bring myself to
    write a good haiku

  2. Ben Avatar
    Ben

    Naaman may be right
    but praises me compliments
    "good haiku" he wrote.

  3. Jane Avatar
    Jane

    your haiku funny,
    flower pretty
    no more chocolate
    time for bed.

    Seriously though, I love haikus though I can't write any myself. Yours made me laugh.